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Renesmee & Jacob
Chapter 3

I ran around the house looking for Jacob but I couldn’t find him! I almost knocked Seth over in my rush.
   “Oh! Sorry Seth! Hey have you seen Jacob anywhere? I need to see him A.S.A.P.”
  He looked at me confused and frowned.
   “I think he was out in the forest hunting before we go out to meet up with the other pack. I’ll tell him you were looking for him if I see him. K?”
  I sighed and nodded. I turned my back to him and ran out the door and into the meadow. Maybe I could find Jacob in the forest.
Before I could get to the safety of the trees Jacob came walking out of the branches not seeing me. He looked dead set on his thoughts. He suddenly stopped and turned to look at me surprised to see me I guessed. He stared at me for a minuet torn and then chose me over what he was doing. He walked over to me and smiled sheepishly.
  I blushed.
He looked away embarrassed. I lifted my fingers to his chin and turned his face so he was looking at me in the eyes.
   “Hey.” I whispered.
   “Hey there.” He grinned.
   “I wanted to tell you something.” I said cupping his face with my hand and he leaned into it automatically.
He closed his eyes contently.
   “And what would that be? But I have to go and meet up with Sam and the other pack so can we be quick?”
I nodded. “Jacob I have been doing a lot of thinking about what happened between us and …” I hesitated.
He was instantly tense waiting for my answer, waiting to see if it was good or bad.
   “Yes?” he asked biting his lip, and closing his eyes.
I looked at his nervous face and it all came out in a rush.
   “Jacob Black. I love you!” I grinned at him. His eyes opened in shock. “I must say it very easy to mistake love with loathing.”
   He put his hands on either side of my face after a long pause while he took it all in. his eyes seemed to melt and he looked more beautiful than I had ever seen him.
  “Are you sure?” he whispered looking into my eyes. I showed him all of the thoughts that I had had about him and the talk that I had with Bella. The tears started to fall from his eyes and he didn’t brush them away, he was still holding my face.
  When I got to the part when I was showing him how I felt right now he leaned in quickly and kissed me full on the mouth. I gasped and wound my arms around his neck and wrapping my legs around his waist. He pulled me up so that I wouldn’t slip off and his lips were soft, urgent and desperate on my lips. A sudden desire I had never felt before came and I wanted to have him for mine. My hands moved down his chest and traced the muscles on his bare chest greedily. I threw myself into the kiss with more force, and I used my strength too much and we fell onto the floor. I ended up on top of him and I unhappily pulled my lips from his with a sigh. We lay there gasping waiting for our breath to return to normal.
  We looked into each other eyes. His eyes were extremely happy and content he was looking at me with so much love in his eyes it was hard to look away, and I was sure that my eyes were exactly the same.
  I got up with a sigh and took his hand to help him up even though I knew he didn’t need the help.
  “I have to go.” He told me when we were up off the floor. I nodded helpless.
   “Don’t be too long.” I grinned teasing him.
He grinned back and he swooped in to kiss me soft and quick.
  He ran back into the forest and was out of sight in seconds. I turned my back on the forest and took a step towards the house.
  That’s when I heard it. There was a footstep behind me and I half turned but not before I felt a sharp pain in my back. I looked down and I saw red on my white blouse that I was wearing.
  My breath came out in gasps. There was so much pain!
I moved my hand to dab at the red. I got some on my hand and I saw that it was blood. Blood?
  I was bleeding? Oh, my, god! I was bleeding!
  So much PAIN! I fell to my knees and looked up to see a man, but he wasn’t a man and he wasn’t a stranger. It was Nathuel and he had blood on his hands.
  He was looking down at me with guilt and hatred.
   “Nathuel? What have you done?” I gasped, looking up at his black expression. He had just stabbed me and my guess was that the dagger was still in my back!
this is my third chapter and i think that it is my best one so far but i think i put in too much detail at the end! please leave comments and let me know what you think!

all charecter belong to the one and only Stepheine Meyer!
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A-Little-Demonic Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, his name is Nahuel, but other than that this is GREAT! But why is he stabbing her?!?
t-wgirl Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
you have to read the other chapters to find out ;P and thanks for pointing that out :)
A-Little-Demonic Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem. ;)
renesmeecullenlov Featured By Owner May 17, 2010
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I LOVE IT DO MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!
t-wgirl Featured By Owner May 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
study leave in a week so i will be able to post more more frequently! i cant wait to see what will happen!
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Vinc3ntMall0y Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
You DEFINITELY need to continue. You are a great writer. :)
tokiohotelfanxxx Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
wow awsum u need to right more now !! or else u got tht lol :Di love ur work
Lauren-Angel-Cullen Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
he is the other vampire hybrid frum breaking dawn . . . and this is awesome!!!!:heart: u must rite mor or i will attack u like this :glomp: only scarier hehe jk!
Theta-Sigma Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009  Student General Artist
OMG!!! hang on who is the dude that stabbed her?
t-wgirl Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
he is another half Vampire like her he is Breaking dawn the last book from Stephenie meyer
Theta-Sigma Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009  Student General Artist
oh Tension be rising ^^
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